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ifuevrsaynvr2l8
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"With her flypaper smile and her needle-tipped fingers..." - She's a Stunner

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Random Poetry Oct 16, 2006 0:15:19 GMT -5

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Post by ifuevrsaynvr2l8 on Oct 16, 2006 0:15:19 GMT -5

So, I've decided to post a couple random pieces... they really have nothing to do with anything, but then, do they need to? So yeah, give me feedback, and if you like them, I'll post more - I've got over 130 poems, lol.

Accidents and Endings

(Delicious anxiety,
Fear held at bay
By a confident grin and unexpected caress)

Stadium Boulevard screeches in the background
As a touch turns to more (and is)
Blown away on disappointed
(But still expectant) lips,
Hesitant with worry and a hope for lost perfection.
A handhold, a lip hold, a stronghold
On a secretly delicate heart:
A squeeze and a beat-
Please don't forget.

once upon a time it ended. leave me?

Could I look
stare
glare at you?
Just one second...
You're beautiful and I don't want to forget this moment
When I'm thrust into space and you're lost forever.
Twisted mind mazes loops zags zigs.
Gone.
End it to start it. It never ends... beginnings are lies.
Giggle pretty chiming notes
To make it seem as if it doesn't matter if it does or doesn't matter.
Lovers battle arrows, daggers, pinpoint silver needle slipping through sweat-soaked fingerholds.
Too late.

"I ate stars that night and you watched and you laughed at my apparent stupidity while I sighed through my chewing and wished I could wish for understanding from you or someone similar to make up for your ignorance." - The Sky Is Falling

Tim Adeth Band Member Posts: 49	Random Poetry Oct 16, 2006 0:50:17 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tim on Oct 16, 2006 0:50:17 GMT -5 That's some pretty deep stuff. You should get published or something. I'd buy your books.

Nathan Adeth Band Member GIR BITCH! Posts: 37	Random Poetry Oct 16, 2006 0:52:38 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Nathan on Oct 16, 2006 0:52:38 GMT -5 Ooooooooooo eyes wide open i love it
	oo baby when you talk like that, you make a woman go crazy, so be wise and keep on, reading the signs on my body- Shakira! :-) ahah.

ifuevrsaynvr2l8
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"With her flypaper smile and her needle-tipped fingers..." - She's a Stunner

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Random Poetry Oct 16, 2006 17:12:47 GMT -5

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Post by ifuevrsaynvr2l8 on Oct 16, 2006 17:12:47 GMT -5

ahhh, what a dream... maybe someday, I suppose, but I've got too much other stuff going on right now. Still, I'll send you an order form (with discounts, of course!) if it ever does happen.

hehe, glad you like it, thanks guys!

Last Edit: Oct 16, 2006 17:14:57 GMT -5 by ifuevrsaynvr2l8

"I ate stars that night and you watched and you laughed at my apparent stupidity while I sighed through my chewing and wished I could wish for understanding from you or someone similar to make up for your ignorance." - The Sky Is Falling

James Adeth Band Member Posts: 23	Random Poetry Oct 17, 2006 1:45:58 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by James on Oct 17, 2006 1:45:58 GMT -5 The second one reminds me of Between The Buried and Me. It's pretty good, I like them both.
	Do you think you're the only who hates? The only one bound to humanistic restraints? Well my belief doesn't make me a saint Through these veins blood still flows so trust me when I say you're not alone I can feel evil too but I refuse to let what haunts my mind destroy the reason this creation was designed Although my eyes are set on the divine, I am still a member of mankind. - Sinai Beach

ifuevrsaynvr2l8 Newbie "With her flypaper smile and her needle-tipped fingers..." - She's a Stunner Posts: 11	Random Poetry Oct 22, 2006 22:16:29 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ifuevrsaynvr2l8 on Oct 22, 2006 22:16:29 GMT -5 So... do I post another? And if so, ya'll are welcome to suggest a category or something, and I'll see if I've written one that fits. Thanks for all the encouragement!
	"I ate stars that night and you watched and you laughed at my apparent stupidity while I sighed through my chewing and wished I could wish for understanding from you or someone similar to make up for your ignorance." - The Sky Is Falling

Tim Adeth Band Member Posts: 49	Random Poetry Oct 23, 2006 1:17:19 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tim on Oct 23, 2006 1:17:19 GMT -5 ifuevrsaynvr2l8 said: So... do I post another? And if so, ya'll are welcome to suggest a category or something, and I'll see if I've written one that fits. Thanks for all the encouragement! Post away!

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Post by Nathan on Oct 16, 2006 0:52:38 GMT -5

Post by ifuevrsaynvr2l8 on Oct 16, 2006 17:12:47 GMT -5

Post by James on Oct 17, 2006 1:45:58 GMT -5

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Post by Tim on Oct 23, 2006 1:17:19 GMT -5